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Thielen's Pain
Unwed;
With none to carry his name.
Cold night;
The man was not to blame.
Lucifer left his mark tonight.
Black smoke kept him at bay.
The Darkness now masks the Light;
And the man falls from Eternal Day.
The house remains,
Cold and strong,
Along with Thielen's pain.
Alone, for one hour long.
Do you care?
Or know his name?
Speak it, I dare.
You only sympathize for fame.
Unwed;
With none to carry his name.
Cold night;
The man was not to blame.
Lucifer left his mark tonight.
Black smoke kept him at bay.
The Darkness now masks the Light;
And the man falls from Eternal Day.
The house remains,
Cold and strong,
Along with Thielen's pain.
Alone, for one hour long.
Do you care?
Or know his name?
Speak it, I dare.
You only sympathize for fame.
A memorum for a friend and neighbor. I wrote this a year or so ago in honor, and have long since lost the original; this is my best attempt at drawing the poem from memory.
You are still missed, my friend.
You are still missed, my friend.
© 2008 - 2024 ronnietheoutlawtorn
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hmm, we spoke about this last night...(i'm assuming you re-did it?)
it's lovely...rather catchy actully.
it's lovely...rather catchy actully.